Your two shorts were so quaint. All the little mousey quirks were written in well. I would like to see you take it to an Epic level!

Well done.    

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Thanks for the comments!

By " Epic" do you mean a book?

You could expand and do a book. But the way I used the word epic I meant more in the meaning of added dramatic flair. i.e. Really playing up the worth of that little mouse's life to the point where this mouse is as important to the history of man as Ceasar himself!

Two nice stories.  I had mixed emotions about the mouse being shot from the tailpipe.  It was funny, yet sad (Bet the mouse wasn't laughing!)

What was amazing about the second story was that all this happened under the noses of all those cats.  

Enjoyed both stories, Mary.