Death By Doughnuts by Terri Rasmussen

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dsullivan
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Posted 07/06/2007 00:03:54 AM

I really liked this one. Lots of sensory input, and very sweet input, I might add. You can almost taste the doughnuts! Lots of good laffs in this funny story.

--Last edited by dsullivan on 2007-06-14 17:27:51 --

dsullivan
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Posted 07/06/2007 00:10:24 AM

$/!\ Delete the topic$

Im not sure if I like this story coming from a 1st person pov. Let me know what you guys think.

Terri

dsullivan
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Posted 07/06/2007 00:12:40 AM

$/!\ Delete the topic$

Personally, I think first person is the best choice, Terri. I would leave it as is.

Megawatts
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Posted 07/06/2007 02:15:09 PM

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The first person can be much more dramatic if written correctly.

Terri does a good job on this one, and like other stories by her, she shows good writing technique in transmitting feelings.

Good job Terri!!!!

TheBlueArcher
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Posted 16/06/2007 12:22:00 AM

$/!\ Delete the topic$

terrific story.
if ya have to go might as well go happy.

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