Great story!

I have often thought of writing a piece from the point of view of a killer, but was never quite sure how to approach it. You did an excellent job of it. Your disclosure was spot on. You gave just enough information for the reader to want to continue on and find out what's what. I did not expect that ending either, which was nice. I hate a predictable ending.

Good job  

[g]Nice sense of menacing and suspense..also liked the unexpected ending.

I love it when the bad guy gets his!!! And this story wasn't a let down.

As a story should be, this one was enjoyable.

I love the ending. An elderly women in a wheel chair packing
at least a 38.

Many of Donald's stories have good winning over evil, and
that puts a human twist into his writings!!

Good story Donald!