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| Author : | Topic: Love Shouldn't Hurt | Bottom |
| dsullivan admin Posts : 137 |
A note about POV: In storytelling, POV can be a tricky matter. It’s generally advisable to stay with one character, especially in a short story. In novels, it’s considered OK to switch , as long as there is no more than one POV per chapter. Sometimes, though, even in a short story, it’s necessary to switch POVs to tell the story properly (so long as it doesn’t distract the reader). When reading Love Shouldn’t hurt, I noticed the POV switch, but didn’t find it too distracting. Like Priscilla, I enjoyed the story and found it to be a look into domestic violence. |
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